POLL IS CLOSED FOR NOOBCAKES. (:

Oathkeeper: NO LONGER CALLED "NOOBCAKES." If you like this, please go check out Bubbly Water at Arcade 7. Hooray for a title? ^^

"My game coins," cried a little boy in the distance. I turned around to notice a little boy looking angrily at the pavement. I hurried over to see what was wrong. "What's wrong?" I asked. "I dropped my game coins in the hole! I had to play dolls with my little sister for an hour to get those," cried the boy. I grabbed his hand and took him into the arcade. "Don't worry! My grandpa owns the game shop, We can play all we want!" "Really?" asked the boy in astonishment. I nodded with a big smile. "I'm Leon and I'm 7, What's your name?" "I'm Yumi, and i'm 6 and a half, I bet you're only 6 and a half too, huh?" "Well I'll be 7 soon anyways, same thing; hey...Do you wanna hold hands?" I held out my hand, and right before our hands came in touch, there was a bright light that flashed, fading everything. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! I slammed the OFF button on my digital alarm clock. Shielding my eyes from the morning sun, I tried to adjust my eyes to the brightness. I was having the same dream for the past 3 days and I absolutely hated it. I kicked my feet in frustration and bit my bottom lip. When we were 8, Leon moved to another state, and he hasn't been back since. By the time I turned 11, I decided not to get my hopes up and get over the fact that he really wasn't going to be back. Missing someone was just a feeling I always hated, and dreaming up my childhood memories didn't help.

EDIT: 10/14/10
I got off my bed and headed toward the bathroom to get ready to head out.The summer days were disappearing, and I pretty much wasted most of it at home doing nothing. I clipped my hair in a bun and hastily put on a shirt along with shorts. The warm smell of toast wafted in the air making my stomach growl. Eager to eat, I quickly brushed my teeth and went down the stairs for breakfast. My older brother, Akira, was at the kitchen counter cracking eggs in a bowl. The sight of my brother in my Hello Kitty apron made my eyes twitch, but was expected.

"GOOD MORNING YUMI, MY ADORABLY CUTE LITTLE SISTER, WHO DESERVES THE BEST IN THE ENTIRE WORLD!" My brother turned around with a big smile, and before I could even put my escape plan into action, I had already fallen victim to his back cracking bear hug. A lot of my friends envied me for having such a "cool" brother. Honestly, I think he just had a sister complex. Maybe "sister complex" was to harsh... overprotective and obsessed, would sound better? I was finally released from his suffocating hug. "By the way, Yumi, I have a surprise for you! I think you'll like it, I found it in a box earlier in the garage." He handed me a picture of Leon and I that was secured in a picture frame. Akira returned to the stove to finish cooking the eggs. I sighed and tossed the picture face down in the recycling box. "You don't like it?" Akira asked. I grabbed a piece of toast and without replying, left the house with a slam of the door.

ISH THIS A LOVE STORY???! OMFG -hogs page- CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!

Oh btw, try INDENTING PARAGRAPHS. Remember, when a new person talks, it`s a new paragraph! o;

whn were u so into grammer leh?
but yah indents plzz
i got first vote AGAIN ;D

thanks for the advice. I plan to make it a romance! But still not sure if i'll absolutely continue this, sometimes I lose inspiration, or run out of ideas. =3=

LOL DUDE! I`m sure I voted first >_>

@ Oathkeeper
OH NOOOES! If you loose inspiration, ask us for advice! D:
Continue ittttt! And yesh, romance <3 x]

wat evr lahhh

MAKE IT A TRAGEDY ;D

ROMANCE AND TRAGIC <3

LMFAO. ROMANTIC TRAGEDY. you know, i was planning to make a character die . frawls. (:

^ OOh Yay! XD
I`ll be looking forward to how this story turns out! XD gl.

Thankyou! but i'll start with figuring out the title first... LOL

^ OOh titles! ♥
Hrmm.... idk! but good luck XD

jst type a random one lik LOL or STORY THE 5183479th

^ LOL ONLY YOU`D DO THAT? O-O

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@magic
i'm sorry, i can't really read chinese.... LOL... although i am chinese.

-will write down later... too tired... - LOL. (:

^ LOL. Don`t be XD

WOAH. HOW DID THAT GET THERE. o_o" LOL. xD YOU KNOW, I FEEL LIKE SUCH A PERVERT WHEN I WATCH DRAMAS, AND THE MAIN CHARACTERS KISS. o_o

^ HOW DO YOU REACT? O-O

"OMG..." -skips scene- i feel embarrassed by it... LOL... how weird... and random... i was just watching Playful Kiss.

LOL.
ikr. especially when u watch those scenes in front of parents >_>

LOL. my mom was watching and she was like... "...what are you watching..."

LOOOL