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Post by chubbiechuchu Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:26 am

I was walking home through a ally to get to my house quicker, I saw a bunch of guys maybe 10 or 11 of them holding bats and knives crowding around me.
"Not a good day to go through this ally by myself." I muttered. The guys came closer. I wished Jake was here with me. I realized that they were from my school. With there "wonderful" leader, Justin.
"Hello sweetheart." Justin said with a mischievous smile.
"What do you want?" I say.
"Oh nothing. We're just playing."
I back away but I bumped into a guy.
"You are not going anywhere, are you sweetheart?" He said.
They group came closer. Justin walked up to me. I figured that they were circling me.


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Post by magic_4thewin Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:02 am

can i point out GRAMMAR ERROR?
jks Smile)
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Post by chubbiechuchu Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:29 am

Sure Rolling Eyes
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Post by chubbiechuchu Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:45 am

I'm not gonna finish this!
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Post by Annie Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:26 pm

CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEE.
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Post by chubbiechuchu Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:23 am

Then i need to start over. I messed it up.
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Post by Annie Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:37 pm

^ aww, no you didn't!
just keep writing~ <3
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Post by chubbiechuchu Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:36 am

I will now. I fixed it. (kinda) I'm working on the other one right now.
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Post by Annie Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:40 pm

^ Good luck!
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